Comic 022 – Friend Issues

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Baker Notes

Dont blame me for the late update, it was told of up front and had filler for the dalay so, no problems i suppose.
And here comes the question with no answer XP:
Can anybody tell me what is missing in my serial? PLEASE answer this one cause i wanna fix my work but i cant get fixing tips from my point of view, how about you, can you tell if something is missing or needs to improve?

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